Sela Locke

I don't--I don't know. It doesn't make sense. He’s not the kind of abusive father you must think of; he doesn’t crash into the house frothing at the mouth, he ...

You can't beat Nu. Then again, you Nu beat can't. So there you have it. I read this on Facebook and I hear I died. Had a weird seizure and ...

Just letting all my faithful followers know: it might be a while before the next chapter. Not, as you might think, because I've not written anymore. No, I've finished the ...

Ian I sat in the very back row of the church. It had only been days since I last saw Kali. I tried to block that memory from my mind. ...

Just tell me what you think, please. I don't need nitpicks, but opinions on the story overall would be quite lovely. Áeryn collapsed into the threadbare armchair by the fire, ...

The review below is rated as the story should be - PG-13. Just thought I'd let everyone know. ;-D - You have pretty good grammar, and only a few typos ...

A short, merry-faced man hopped out of the carriage, blue eyes twinkling in the light of his lantern. “You’re a brave one, and no mistake. And who’re these other gentlemen ...

Heyyy, Ash! Backbackback again! As usual, nitpicks d'abord ! immense change that overtook her. Her hair had taken Repetition of take . Change taken to acquired or attained or gained ...

Here we go! Nitpicks fiiiirsst. It was as though I had entered a world in absence of light. Wrong way to say it. It was as if I had entered ...

Perfection. To more amateur writers like us, it merely means a total lack of humanity and description to our characters. Perhaps if one of the classical authors created a perfect ...

W-w-w-well, I return in a flash of glorious white light, if you don't mind, Ash dear. We writers really do have a flair for the dramatic, don't we? Arrrrhrrhmm! I'd ...

Your dad reads your stories? That's cool. Mine'd have to rip my Mac from my hands to read any of my stuff -- not that he would. xD Er, anyways, ...

Well, here I am again. I suppose I was rather harsh last time I reviewed, and for that, well, I apologize. It's perfectly beastly, having someone continuously beat your story ...

Dash.

PG-13 for suggestive themes and a lickle violence. Do as I have directed you, servants! Revision to be done when all the chapters have been reviewed by my faithful critiquers. ...